1. Who was/were involved in the
story?
- Myself, my family and my friend.
2. What happened?
-I went to Koh Talu.
-I met my long lost friends.
-Two months ago, around twelve
hours.
4. Where did the story happen?
-At
Koh Talu, Lomlye Restaurant.
5. How did it happen?
-I went to Koh Talu with my family.
-I had to take a boat to a across
there.
-I was a voice calling my name.
Who is the name?
-Her name is Ploy, she is a friend.
6. How did the story end?
-I have been with my family for the
first time.
-I have also met my long lost
friends.
My special day.
Two months ago I went to Koh Talu
with my family. I was excited because the first time. I took travel and arrived
around twelve hours because I had to take a boat to a across there. After that
I went to take photos and walked around
the beach. There are beautiful views and very good weather then it had nice
hotel. Later in the evening my family and I went to seafood at the Lomlye
Restaurant. Then I was shocked because it here was cheap and fresh. The
important thing that made me excited about the show of the shop staff because a
strange never seen before and very creative. Next, while eating, there was a
voice calling my name. I look at and I was shocked because I saw my friend, her
name is Ploy she is a friend that I love so much and never met her after
graduating from Sriwichai School. I miss her so much. She is a good friend No
matter how bad I feel, she never abandoned me. This trip makes me very happy. I
have been with my family for the first time and have also met my long lost
friends.


I think that's a very interesting thing to read but there may be a wrong sentence.
ตอบลบ8.5/10
Your story is ok. But you use the wrong words and sentences, you should to learn about vocaburaly and tenses more. I give you 6/10
ตอบลบ*special, not spacial
ตอบลบIn your story, you have a lot of mistakes such as you forgot add a comma and you should use "At" with the place. I give you 7.5.
ตอบลบYour story is very interesting and It’s a about your special day. You choose the topic is very interesting, easy to understand, and good grammar. If you have more information it will make your work is good job so I will give you 8.5/10
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