Flooding
in Asia
Nowadays, there is
flooding problem in many countries in Asia including Thailand.
The
flood can damage many issues such as agriculture, buildings, roads, cause the
delay of transportation and many others issue that involve with people well-being.
The
problem of flooding should be solved in order to reduce the unexpected damage
and helps to protect people.
In addition, the cause of
flood is the priority that should be considered.
Flood
can cause by destroying forest, the emission of greenhouse gas from vehicle and
industrial zone and lack of good water administration.
These
issues need involvement and recognition of people in the country.
We
can use public transportation instead of using own vehicle, grow the trees to
increase forest area and control greenhouse gas emission from the mills.
These problems can be solved by everyone participation.
Finally, flooding problem
can be both caused and solved by everyone. This
problem caused by lack of environmental consideration.
Therefore, the best
solution is making people in country think about environmental saving by
changing lifestyle and using the law to protect forest damage and greenhouse
gas emission.
I think that your content is not bad, but it makes me a little confused. Overall is ok. I will give you 8/10.
ตอบลบFor the topic, it's very interesting, but you have a little mistake that is many "others" issues you should write many "other" issues and by destroying "forest" you should write by destroying "forests". Overall, you write it well, so I give you 8.5/10.
ตอบลบI like your presentation very much. Thank you for sharing the story about the disaster. It made me even more aware of the flood. You may be suggesting more ways to solve this problem. I give you 9/10
ตอบลบThank you for your story about the flood in Asia. It makes me awake to be more careful in living. Your story can be easily understood. Although there are some wrong spots, I give you 8.5 points.
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