My best friends.
My
group of friends consisted of three person and I. My friends are name Sai,Mehw
and Looked. They are very close and know each other very well. My friends have
three styles. First person, she name is Sai (ahead person). She has
medium height and plump. She has a tanned complexion and big brown eyes. And
she is very optimistic and she has a special feature is bald head.
Next
person who in front of me, she name is Mehw. She is well-built and fair. She
has an oval face and point noes. She is a confidence woman. Her special feature
is communication with others badly.
Last
person who is left hand me, she name is Looked. She is a beautiful woman. She
has bright brown eyes and long straight hair. She is sensitive to feeling. However,
when she was disappointed in love she is strong woman and don’t cry to anyone.
All
this my friends style, they are different but they are all mix together. The
reason that I chose this picture because it reminds me of the great memory. I
have always thought of my friends even though we have separated, but good
feeling of being together always remains to me. They are trusted and best
friends for me.
Your friends are so cute. I think it's a really good story.so I give you 10 points
ตอบลบYour story is good. In my opinion, you give less details for your friends. You can give more details than this. I give you 6/10.
ตอบลบYour story is not bad. You have a little mistake about pronoun such as some sentences you should use "her". So I give you 8/10.
ตอบลบWow!!! I am in this picture this picture. Your story is very interesting, easy to understand, and good grammar. I like this story too much and you choose the topic is very interesting it make your work is good job so I will give you 10/10
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