The
beautiful hug
This is
picture of mother and daughter happy together. Young mother smiling and a girl
hugging her mother in the morning at diving room.
The first one
is young mother, she name’s Mogran. She is well-build of 40 years.
She has an
oval face with pointed nose. She has long straight hair and has a tanned complexion
and bright brown eyes. She dressed in blue jeans, white T-shirt and dark gray
overcoat. Her special feature is a mole. She is open-minded and optimistic
because when the daughter made a mistake, she will stay with her side always.
Next person
is the daughter who is pretty girls. She is in her early teens of 11 years. She
has a round face with bright blue eyes. She has a tanned complexion and wavy
blond hair. Her nose is pointed and special feature is a dimple. She wears a
pink T-shirt. She is good-tempered and talkative.
The
reason that I choose this picture because It convey the meaning very well.
Showing pure love and fresh smile.
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